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Marty rereads her draft and notices which of the following does not match the tone of her paper?

F G H

Sentence 4 Sentence 8 Sentence 16

J

Sentence 18

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When Marty reviews her draft, she realizes that sentence 15 is confusing: The trail riders joined with several local bike shops, a local construction company, and the city’s Parks and Recreation Department was joined by the trail riders. Which of the following is the best revision?

A

The trail riders joined with several local bike shops, a local construction company, and the city’s Parks and Recreation Department.

B

The trail riders joined with several local bike shops, and by a local construction company, and the city’s Parks and Recreation Department.

C

The trail riders joined with several local bike shops, and a local construction company and the city’s Parks and Recreation Department joined the trail riders.

D

The trail riders joined with several local bike shops, a local construction company

was there, and the city’s Parks and Recreation Department.

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