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How can Carol best combine the following two sentences from Draft A?

My friend Tony Donato asked me to be his campaign manager in his bid for junior class president. I quickly agreed.

F

When my friend Tony Donato asked me to be his campaign manager in his bid for junior class president, I quickly agreed.

G

My friend Tony Donato, in his bid for junior class president, asked me to be his campaign manager when I quickly agreed.

H

In his bid for junior class president, my friend Tony Donato quickly agreed and asked me to be his campaign manager.

J

Quickly agreeing in his bid for junior class president was my friend Tony Donato,

and he asked me to be his campaign manager.

How can Carol best revise this sentence from paragraph 3 of Draft A?

Warning Tony that he needed to prepare really well for the approaching debate with Lorna, he wouldn’t listen to me.

A

Warning Tony that he needed to prepare really well for the approaching debate with Lorna is what I was doing but he wouldn’t listen to me.

B

He needed to prepare really well for the approaching debate with Lorna, he wouldn’t listen to me when I warned him.

C

Tony, he needed to prepare really well for the approaching debate with Lorna, he wouldn’t listen to me, I warned him.

D

I warned Tony that he needed to prepare really well for the approaching debate

with Lorna, but he wouldn’t listen to me.

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