Sarah has written a second draft of the first part of her essay.
(1)A special person in my life is my big brother. (2)His name is Ben. (3)He has always been supportive of me.
In rewriting sentence 3 of Draft A, how has Sarah improved sentence 3 of Draft B?
A B C D
She has created a fragment. She has changed the meaning entirely. She has expressed the idea more concisely. She has shifted the point of view.
Here is the next part of Sarah’s rough draft.
(4)The best thing about my brother is that he helps me with my homework. (5)He’s a really good student.
he were helping
he have helped
As it is
In sentence 4, he helps is correctly written —