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SAMPLE C

Sarah has written a second draft of the first part of her essay.

Draft B

(1)A special person in my life is my big brother. (2)His name is Ben. (3)He has always been supportive of me.

In rewriting sentence 3 of Draft A, how has Sarah improved sentence 3 of Draft B?

A B C D

She has created a fragment. She has changed the meaning entirely. She has expressed the idea more concisely. She has shifted the point of view.

SAMPLE D

Here is the next part of Sarah’s rough draft.

(4)The best thing about my brother is that he helps me with my homework. (5)He’s a really good student.

F

he were helping

G

he help

H

he have helped

J

As it is

In sentence 4, he helps is correctly written —

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