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When Marty rereads her draft, she realizes that sentence 6 lacks elaboration. Which of the following is the best way for her to revise it?

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Christy knew that Roosevelt Park had some water somewhere in it. Christy knew that Roosevelt Park had a clean, lively creek running through it. Christy knew that Roosevelt Park had fresh water. Christy knew that Roosevelt Park had a creek in it.

How can Marty best combine sentences 10 and 11 without changing their meaning?

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She and other riders’ signatures asked all of their friends if they would sign the list, and so they gathered three hundred bikers.

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She and other riders asked all of their biking friends if they would sign the list, gathering three hundred signatures.

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She gathered three hundred signatures, so she asked all of their biking friends, other riders, if they would sign the list.

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She asked all of their biking friends if they would sign the list, so other riders

gathered three hundred signatures.

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